Wednesday 19 June 2019

whats that smell

this week we have been learning how to do narrative writing what and  roller coaster its been here what I've done .

POO! What’s that  smell? Why does it smell like dog in here? I don’t  even own a dog. I inhaled deeply. Yep,
I can definitely smell a dog.

I opened one eye feeling afraid . I moved my hand and  rubbed my eye and what
I see frightens me . It was like I was  in a delusion slowly moving toward the mirror  on 4 feet
Screaming for help , wanting to  go home. Only thing you could hear was a dog barking. A big  lepeared

Runs outside  and animals sprinting  back into my room trying  to go back to sleep hoping it was just a dream
23  people at camp, morning tea is ready guys. Craunching  into bed, waking up 30min latter not being able

to get it off the top of my head the thought  being a leopard wanting to know why i'm the only leopard and ever

everyone else is a dog. Feeling bad but deep down feeling cool .
I can  run faster i can see in the dark OMG! Best day that ever happened to me.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Joshua, My name is Tehanah and I currently attend Tautoro School as a year 8 student! I enjoyed reading your narrative writing text. This is a very interesting piece of writing. Maybe next time you could combined into your intro, why you had to complete this task. You could also start off by going over your introduction and checking for any minor mistakes. Keep up the great work!! Blog yah later! Nga mihi Tehanah

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